User talk:Baileyseymour/sandbox

Bailey Peer Review
Nice start! I like how you acknowledge that there aren't enough references featured in the article. I'm curious as to where you are going to find such sources - mainly online or books? Be aware of staying neutral the entire time when writing about his style. How you interpret his work might be different than how others perceive it. I also noticed that the font in the list of works varies, so please consider fixing this as well. I agree that there needs to be more information on his early life. As you asked, how did he become involved in dance? I am kind of interested in what he is currently doing since he is still very relevant in the dance community today. It might be hard to do because what he is doing 'now' is bound to change within the years. For example, exactly how is he involved with USC's dance department? Overall, really good start - I think you're on the right path. -jhom22

Peer Review
Bailey - Your notes on the Wiki page for William Forsythe seem like a great start to get you moving in the right direction. Your attention to the length of the sections is necessary, and it seems you've noted how many sources were cited in specific sections of the article, which is important so that you can make sure the whole article has an equal amount of credible references. Also, it is important that you noted what the article didn't have/have enough of - for instance the information on Forsythe's education and career was minimal, and there was really no information about his life prior to his dance career. Good work!

- Shayna Valianos — Preceding unsigned comment added by Shaynavali (talk • contribs) 03:30, 8 March 2018 (UTC)