User talk:BalanceRestored/Sandbox

Hi BalanceRestored...I have't forgotten about you, "real life" has just been real busy, and I haven't had time to get online much. We have much to talk about! Thanks for sharing your thoughts and background...and I really like the quote "Follow the GOD's word unchanged. It is not right to change that. GOD knows why he wrote things. Have faith in him" on your user page...it sums up much of my belief and thinking about God. Looking forward to talking more with you!  AK Radecki Speaketh  05:09, 20 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Hi Balance...I've finally got some time where I can put some quality attention into your efforts. First, some small comments:
 * In your additions to Vedas, you used the number 5. Generally, for numbers ten and under, it's proper to spell them out. You might want to consider going back and changing that. Same for your draft article...you use 5th rather than the more proper fifth.
 * For your draft article User:BalanceRestored/Sandbox/Pranava Veda, consider useing the newer reflist format rather than the format.
 * When you first use the title subject in the first line, it should be bolded.
 * You have a "See Also" listing of an article that appears to have about the same title. Is this actually different than what you're writing about? If so, you need to write about the differences.
 * Yes, incorporate the references as on the talk page. Give us details about this Veda.


 * I hope this is a good start for you.  AK Radecki Speaketh  15:28, 24 July 2007 (UTC)