User talk:Baleix2

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Hello, Baleix2, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Peer Review
1. I really liked that the group wrote a lot and in a clear way about Tom Tuohy and his history throughout his life until the creation of Dreams for Kids. We can see in the article that he is the focused on in almost every section, so it is very well explained his motivations and thoughts. Also, I feel the article is really neutral and with a clear structure so far.

2. I would explain a little bit more HOW the organization puts into practice what it values. Although there is a list of events they did, I just feel think it would be nice to mention their methodology throughout the activities they promote. 3. I would insert more references to the article, once there are just two (both from Chicago Tribune year 2015) and there is a lot written.

4. I think my group can also create a leadership section to write a little bit more about the leaders of the organization.

Baleix2 (talk) 19:06, 19 April 2020 (UTC)