User talk:Ballaman365/Anal pore

Peer Review
Images are appropriate and information is relevant to what's in the article. The information itself is also presented so it is relatively easy to understand. Good job there.

While your edit looks good, there are some points I'm confused on. For starters, what are Ctenophores? You talk about them all throughout the article but you don't explain what ctenophores are, which had me confused until I looked them up separately. Might be a good way to connect your edit with the rest of the article?

Also there's your references. If you're going to use them for your article they need to be cited in the text to show where each piece of information comes from.

Lastly, where do you want your edit to go in the article? I can't really tell, but at the beginning would make no sense and I don't think the end wouldn't really work either. AshRecord (talk) 21:09, 4 November 2022 (UTC)


 * Thank you for your edits it is noticed and highly appreciated. 137.142.177.109 (talk) 17:56, 14 November 2022 (UTC)