User talk:Bananajamma/sandbox

This is a good start. Move item 1 to space before Table of Contents. Consider putting theory before history since that is the main subject. In the next outline, include subheadings, keeping in mind all the required article elements.Hagen76 (talk) 05:37, 10 May 2014 (UTC) Figures: you need one more, and the existing ones are too small to see without clicking on them, especially the second one. Resize. The data table is missing. Make sure that when you mention something that isn't common knowledge, such as the Langmuir isotherm, you link to that article. You need have 8 total references. Hagen76 (talk) 16:33, 3 June 2014 (UTC)

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You need to add the intro paragraph, and then post this. Hagen76 (talk) 19:25, 12 June 2014 (UTC)