User talk:Barabaraphil

Hello Anupmehra,

Thanks for reviewing my article. I was wondering if you can point out the problematic parts of the article or give me some guidelines for editing it.

I read carefully the 'writing better articles' and 'manual of style/words to watch' pages. When I wrote the article I tried to follow the language and content of similar companies' Wikipedia pages (for example New Relic, Jelastic, GigaSpaces).

Thanks!


 * Hello Okay, I'm re-analyzing the submission page. Have patience. However, I'd like to let you know that next time you leave me a msg on your talk page, leave that  template on my talk page.  Anup  Mehra  ✈ 16:46, 22 January 2014 (UTC)
 * Hello again, . Please re-submit your submission. Anup  Mehra  ✈ 16:52, 22 January 2014 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Takipi (January 18)
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 * Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Anup  Mehra  ✈ 23:25, 18 January 2014 (UTC)

Your submission at AfC Takipi was accepted
 Takipi, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as Stub-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. . Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! Anup Mehra  ✈ 12:14, 23 January 2014 (UTC)
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