User talk:BaroqueHater/sandbox

The topic sentence is good, but it needs to go above the table of context. Trade window portion is well written and done very well. On the first paragraph of the Window Layout where did you find this information about panels 1-4? Second sentence in the Location of Church portion specify which saint you are referring to. Under Signature of windows since there is already a page dedicated to tanning you probably don't need any other information other than the link for this portion. In the signature window portion when referencing the authors name is already in the reference item, so writing the authors name in the paragraph is unnecessary. The citations on the Life of Saint Thomas Becket portion are incomplete. In the portion on the death of Saint Thomas Becket all that is listed is "Duff" which offers no information to his death and since there was not any citations I am wondering where you found this information. --JonahBeckham15 (talk) 14:09, 9 March 2020 (UTC)