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Your submission at Articles for creation: Institute of Jewish audiovisual memory (July 1)
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Issue with footnotes at Draft:Institute of Jewish Audiovisual Memory
Hello, I took a look at your draft, but have concerns about footnoting. Simply saying "New York Times, 4 April 1980" or similar is really not helpful to the discussion. At the very least, we need a clear title for said article, and ideally the author and page number. Otherwise the poor reader is just being told "yeah, the NYT wrote something about this in 1980", which doesn't really clear up what you're proving with the footnote.

If a given article isn't available online, you can still cite the article but it must be a clear cite. I would strongly advise you read WP:Referencing for beginners, which can help make your citations much stronger and increase the likelihood of publishing this article. MatthewVanitas (talk) 22:18, 4 July 2014 (UTC)

Reference Errors on 8 July
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Draft:Institute of Jewish Audiovisual Memory (August 15)
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Cerebellum (talk) 15:52, 15 August 2014 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Institute of Jewish Audiovisual Memory (November 24)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by The Herald was:

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 The herald  12:21, 24 November 2014 (UTC)

Draft:Institute of Jewish Audiovisual Memory concern
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Your draft article, Draft:Institute of Jewish Audiovisual Memory


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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. JMHamo (talk) 20:28, 4 June 2015 (UTC)