User talk:Basilgreenmint1/American Beach, Florida

Peer Review by Jupiter2457

Lead: The lead does a good job of introducing the aspects of environmental justice that the group is adding to the existing article. I think this section could use a couple more sentences to connect it with the rest of the article

Article Body: I think the proposed paragraph sections are very concise and will provide relevant information to the current article. I like how your group will add information to the Abraham Lincoln Lewis page as well since the two are connected. I think the section on segregation and Jim Crow will be important to connect the dots between the existing article and the environmental justice components. I like how your group are ending on the logistics of the beach after the end of the Jim Crow Era.

References: List looks good so far!

Overall Impressions: I think the additions your group is going to make a very helpful contribution to the existing article. Keep up the good work!

Peer Review
I like the ideas you have written down for the article. I think it's very important to discuss the history behind the American Beach. I think when you mention Jim Crow laws in the article you should include the link thing that will connect it to the wikipedia page on Jim Crow laws in the south after the Antebellum Era. Good stuff! Keep up the good work.Plata Satin (talk) 10:57, 1 March 2022 (UTC)Plata Satin