User talk:Basilgreenmint1/Subsistence agriculture

Peer review by Jupiter2457 and Kt1628

Lead: Similar to the lead of the existing article, however the information is concise and informative to the information that will be presented throughout the article. Missing a citation in the draft after the direct quote, but I do see it in the existing article.

Content: History- same as existing article. Contemporary Practices- Information that is added is relevant to the existing article. Will your group go into more detail about the challenges that modern subsistent agriculturists face? Climate Change Impact- This new section is going to be key for tying in the environmental justice component to the existing article. Should be expanded.

References: Clearly organized and used appropriately. References in sandbox are currently and relate to the topic of subsistent agriculture.

Overall Impressions: Good work so far! Not a lot of new material added but I can see the vision for adding small bits of information throughout. Keeps a neutral tone in the added portions. I think expanding on the ideas you added to bring in more of the environmental justice angle will really elevate your groups contributions (I know this is a very light rough draft). Keep up the good work!