User talk:Basirinasim/sandbox

Marcelo's Peer Review: I would recommend that you switch the "Personal Life" tab to the end. Maybe change the tab to "Personal Life and Death"? Otherwise, great job.

Prof. Smith feedback: Hi Nassim,

I think that you're off to a good start here. You did a very thorough job of explaining Lashgari's scholarship and academic pursuits, as well as her academic background. Since the article is falling about 115 words short of the minimum requirement for grad students (you're at 485 and the minimum as 600), I would like to see you add in more content. As Marcelo notes above, personal life seems like a good place to do that. You don't have much in here about her early influences, jobs, or death. You could also consider adding a section on "Critical Reception" that would explain different responses and reactions to her work. Did she have critics? Who disagreed with her or built on her work? What were the lasting legacies of her writing on other scholars?

Remember, too, that you also need to include a "See Also" and an "External Links" section to complete the assignment requirements. The article template posted on the first page of our Canvas course has the details about what to include in these sections and how to format them. — Preceding unsigned comment added by StaceySmithOSU (talk • contribs) 00:28, 1 December 2018 (UTC)