User talk:Batcapital2020

The page on Walt Disney -- being one of his biggest fans -- was influential for me. Great work reporting on Disney in general. The credibility of the sources and info is exceptional, establishing trust for the readers, and the outline after the introduction is chronological, making it easy to follow and understand the progression of Disney's life. However, it seems as though within the introduction, it jumps abruptly from theme parks and Disney's contribution directly to his death all within the same paragraph, ending frantically with a statement of death. Mechanically, these two topics regarding Disney coud be reorganized to better represent Disney's life as a whole.