User talk:Bavile

AfC notification: Draft:Mellatron has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Mellatron. Thanks! Theroadislong (talk) 12:23, 31 August 2023 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Mellatron (August 31)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by DoubleGrazing were:

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DoubleGrazing (talk) 12:54, 31 August 2023 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Mellatron (August 31)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by DoubleGrazing were:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Mellatron and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
 * If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk/New_question&withJS=MediaWiki:AFCHD-wizard.js&page=Draft:Mellatron Articles for creation help desk], on the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:DoubleGrazing&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:AfC_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:Mellatron reviewer's talk page] or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

DoubleGrazing (talk) 13:13, 31 August 2023 (UTC)

Creating an article
Please read WP:YFA articles are not based on what you know about a topic, we report on what reliable independent sources have said about a topic. Theroadislong (talk) 13:31, 31 August 2023 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Mellatron has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Mellatron. Thanks! Theroadislong (talk) 13:41, 31 August 2023 (UTC)


 * @Theroadislong I fully appreciate and agree with your comments. I am a novice to submitting Wikipedia articles and was still updating the draft article when I accidentally submitted the draft for submission. I had not finished updating the citations and links which provide evidence to the description and historical text I provided. Bavile (talk) 13:51, 31 August 2023 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Mellatron has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Mellatron. Thanks! Theroadislong (talk) 14:21, 31 August 2023 (UTC)