User talk:Bay15/sandbox

Hi, here are some thoughts on your sandbox:
 * Wikipedia has a particular style guide so that articles are consistent. One of the parts of the style guide is that references should directly follow punctuation (no spaces). So you can make that adjustment to your article.
 * Another part of the style guide is that when an article has sections, the section titles should be in sentence case instead of title case. So only the first word of the section title and any proper nouns should be capitalized. Instead of "Organic Causes", you would instead have "Organic causes"
 * In general, we link a word or phrase at its first occurrence. It looks like you linked Broca's area at its second occurrence

The content and the citations are looking pretty good! Mostly just minor formatting tweaks to make. Let me know if you have any questions. Thanks, Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:37, 14 April 2020 (UTC)