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Maybe change wording and take our commonsKatiea32 (talk) 18:40, 12 April 2016 (UTC)
The young boy travels atop a nearby mountain, and kidnaps a young, infantile hawk before it is able to fly itself.

The young boy travels to a nearby mountain, and kidnaps a young infantile hawk before it is able to fly. Katiea32 (talk) 18:40, 12 April 2016 (UTC)

Fixing up the sentence.
This sentence "who has lost her one of her eight ducklings" should be "who has lost one of her eight ducklings." — Preceding unsigned comment added by Anneteag (talk • contribs) 17:41, 3 May 2016 (UTC)