User talk:Bazsha

Your submission at Articles for creation: Total Media (January 25)
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Total Media (March 7)
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Thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia! Hasteur (talk) 20:45, 7 March 2014 (UTC)
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I've seen your questions about the reviews for Total Media. I work very frequently with articles on firms of this sort, and peerhaps some specific comments about what is needed would help:

We consider it promotional to provide a list of the routine services--the ones listed are what's expected from any such agency. We consider it promotional to list all the officers, rather than just the ceo/President. "Significant recognition" needs to be replace by a statement of just what the recognition is--and, frankly, none of the awards listed are particularly significant (one out of 24 winners is trivial, top 100 "small" companies is much less important than top 100 companies would be). The routine trade association memberships are not encyclopedic content: they belong only on the firm's web site.

At present, if this were in main space, it would be almost immediately deleted. both on the ground of promotionalism, and on the ground of lack of evidence for notability.  DGG ( talk ) 18:55, 15 March 2014 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Total Media


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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. JMHamo (talk) 16:01, 30 December 2014 (UTC)