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Exhibition Manager Review
Generally, your article meets Wikipedia’s featured article criteria. It is well researched with appropriate citations and engaging media. In addition it is written in a non-biased tone and of a decent length. Including a description of what an exhibition is helps to place the role of exhibition manager in context with the many other collection roles in a museum.

The content is good but you may want to consider editing the lead section. If the second sentence was moved so that it followed the last sentence and remove the first sentence because it sounds very similar to the first sentence then, it might make the initial statement generally defining what an exhibition manager is and does stronger. It would then read “Exhibition Managers are skilled museum professionals tasked with implementing and overseeing a museum’s exhibition program including developing, designing and installing/de-installing exhibits. They also assist with generating exhibition topics; interpreting scholarly content; collaborating with designers and fabricators to produce exhibitions that convey exhibition content effectively to audiences; and evaluating the success of the exhibitions (i.e., whether or not the museum's goals were achieved). Exhibition development--along with research, teaching, publishing and conservation--is considered to be one of the most important functions for academic museums.”