User talk:Bclarizio

The introduction to the article had too many facts, some of which weren't thoroughly explained later on. Rather than an overview of what was to come it just started in on facts and information. The content was all relevant but since this is a broad topic, there should've been more sections after the intro. The tone that this was written in feels neutral and informative. Most of the information wascited by valid sources but overall there could've been more. Bclarizio (talk) 21:04, 25 April 2022 (UTC)

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