User talk:Be llama27/sandbox

Make sure to include citations for all of the awards she was nominated and rewarded

"Her undergraduate education was spent at Stanford University where she received a Bachelor of Science in Biological Sciences, Neuroscience and Marine Biology from Stanford University in 1990" -- you say Stanford twice. Clean up this sentence and make it flow better.

"PhD in Soil and Ecosystem Science at the University of California, Berkeley" proper way to write Ph.D.

Highlight more of her important research and what makes her notable and what her impact is.

Good use of a variety of sources.

Try to include a research section, this might help portray the importance/notability of her. — Preceding unsigned comment added by M spaethling (talk • contribs) 17:44, 14 September 2018 (UTC)

Becca's comments
"associate professor" should be "Associate Professor" because it is her title

suggested edit: Her research focuses the ways that human activity, particularly urban landscapes, influences ecosystem ecology [1]. She is a proud dog owner and nature enthusiast[2][3].

in early life & education hyperlink the school (https://www.stanford.edu/) and department (as well as the rest of her education, etc.) - it will increase traffic to her site and make it more connected

refer to her by her last name (not her first)

Currently she teaches at Arizona State University, CHANGE to: Currently she is an associate professor at Arizona State University, where she serves as the Director of the Environmental Life Sciences PhD program[1] FIND A DIFFERENT SOURCE THAN HER WEBSITE - she should be listed on the schools website as such — Preceding unsigned comment added by Waterbarnes (talk • contribs) 20:56, 15 September 2018 (UTC)

Nominations - if she didn't receive these awards remove this Awards - try to find different citations/sources for these

Research Interests - you need to add this to your biography for her - perhaps 2-3 short paragraphs about the different things she works on (short paragraph - 3-4 sentences)

Public Engagement - can you add a 2 sentence summary?

This is a great start, Bella! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Waterbarnes (talk • contribs) 21:13, 15 September 2018 (UTC)