User talk:Beachsunsetlover/sandbox

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Nice work on your additions. Two things I recommend changing
 * Add links to other articles. You should link a term the first time it appears in an article, if the term is likely to be unfamiliar to the average reader.
 * I strongly recommend using the citation tool to insert references instead of using the usual (Author, date) format. Using the cite tool creates references that are easier to maintain in the long term, and it produces a format that's more consistent across most of the other articles on the site. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:33, 25 August 2019 (UTC)