User talk:Bear606/sandbox

The lead section is easy to understand and clearly defines the page topic. Maybe add a few more sentences to the first paragraph so we can understand the article even more.

Structure: organized, takes the term through history, in a sensible order

Balanced Coverage: beginning stages obviously, well cited with two sources, bring more perspectives in from both a male and female outlook, the article is internationally driven with multiple regions represented which is important to have

Neutral Content: controversial issues so be extra conscientious of remaining detached from the topic, but good job so far

Reliable Sources: try to define term more if possible. Need more academic sources with the delicate nature of the topic. Use more articles like your JSTOR journal because that is a strong academic source.

Reflects the most important information, gives more weight to the history, I would recommend bridging the gap between past, present and future of patriarchal bargain in social contexts.

Suggestions: more modern examples, more citations, good job!