User talk:Beardk11

Your submission at Articles for creation: TeamTalk (April 21)
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InsertCleverPhraseHere  07:33, 21 April 2016 (UTC)

To read
Here are some important things to read about:
 * A simple notability guideline
 * Your first article
 * The plain and simple conflict of interest guide
 * Peacock and weasel words
 * Reliable sources
 * Original research

Anna Frodesiak (talk) 10:33, 25 April 2016 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:TeamTalk has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:TeamTalk. Thanks! InsertCleverPhraseHere  21:23, 2 May 2016 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:TeamTalk has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:TeamTalk. Thanks! InsertCleverPhraseHere  19:49, 3 May 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: TeamTalk has been accepted
 TeamTalk, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. . Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! Happy Squirrel (talk) 02:55, 12 May 2016 (UTC)
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TeamTalk
Hello and congratulations on the new article. You may have noticed that I trimmed the article significantly in places and removed some references. This is because sometimes non-independent sources can do more harm than good. They tend to skew the content away from what the reader of an encyclopedia wants to know and more towards marketing and minutiae. This is especially true when the main contributor is connected to the subject. They also tend to make the stronger sources harder to find in the reference list. I hope you don't mind. A new page patroller should be by shortly, possibly with more comments. Happy editing! Happy Squirrel (talk) 03:00, 12 May 2016 (UTC)