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Your submission at Articles for creation: Harry Hunt (April 8)
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Robert McClenon (talk) 13:21, 8 April 2016 (UTC)

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Welcome to Wikipedia, Beaumont8! Thank you for your contributions. I am Mz7 and I have been editing Wikipedia for some time, so if you have any questions feel free to leave me a message on my talk page. You can also check out Questions or type at the bottom of this page. Here are some pages that you might find helpful: Also, when you post on talk pages you should sign your name using four tildes ( ~ ); that will automatically produce your username and the date. I hope you enjoy editing here and being a Wikipedian! Mz7 (talk) 02:56, 27 April 2016 (UTC)
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Harry Hunt has been accepted
 Harry Hunt, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. . Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! Mz7 (talk) 03:33, 27 April 2016 (UTC)
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Good topic. For future improvement, I would watch your tone as you write encyclopedia articles. Wikipedia must be written from a neutral point of view, describing facts and opinions in an unbiased manner. Avoid subtly embellishing a topic, such as by saying Hunt "impressively" won a championship – simply state that he won a championship and allow the reader to draw their own conclusions from that. If you are including opinions, make sure you are giving due weight to opinions that might not be as positive. Since the subject is a living person, it is very important that you make sure everything that could possibly be challenged is cited to a reliable source—see our biographies of living persons policy. These are just some general tips. Overall, it was a good start! I appreciated your inclusion of multiple reliable sources. Best of luck, Mz7 (talk) 03:39, 27 April 2016 (UTC)