User talk:Beccalouj/sandbox

Peer review from Soohyun
Overall, this Wikipedia page is well organized and reflecting important contents of reference literatures appropriately. Figures and schemes are also clear and easy to interpret.

Some comments for further improvement include:

1.	Refine the language. There are quite a few awkward sentences as well as typos, and correcting them would be helpful to make this page easier to read. I am not a native English speaker so not at the proper position to make actual suggestions however.

2.	In Figure 3, please label the atoms. Although it is pretty obvious for people who have some background in chemistry that the leftmost atom is phosphorus, it may not be crystal clear to everyone. Figure 6-8 also seem to need labels on atoms.

3.	Are the values in Table 1 from your own calculation? The bond lengths seem slightly different from those found in the cited literature, and I cannot find data of delocalization energy from the literature. I am not certain if these are considered as proper reproduction of published results, not as your original work.

4.	Similarly, I am not able to find AIM analysis (Figure 6-8) from cited literatures.

5.	Please clarify what “ketene isomer” is among the possible resonance structures.

6.	If the Figure 6 is considered appropriate (not as your original work), how about adding the same plots for NCO and AsCO for comparison? Also, the meaning of the sentence “this makes the elemental atom an increasing source of E- (see Figures 5 and 6).” is not clear to me.