User talk:Beckyyy Fox

Welcome!
Hello, Beckyyy Fox, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Sourcing
Hi! I saw that you added a section on a model that was created by Del Hawkins, however the only source you used is the one he himself wrote. To show where this is a notable model you need to supply secondary, independent sources to show that others have covered his model. The issue at hand here is that these secondary sources are needed to show where this is notable enough to mention in the article, as well as to help show his claims in context.

Also, make sure that you're careful to fit Wikipedia's style guidelines. This isn't badly written, but it needs to more closely fit the style used in pages like Models of communication. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:26, 27 February 2019 (UTC)