User talk:Bedrossian

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Bedrossian, good luck, and have fun. Stinglehammer (talk) 19:53, 29 October 2018 (UTC)

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Not sure why the placement of this text in the lead? Expecially when the lead already covered much of this content. It is important to read the article first to determine what is already there. Generally we keep the lead to 4 paragraphs. Best

Doc James (talk · contribs · email) 22:52, 1 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Have combined some of it into better areas. Doc James  (talk · contribs · email) 23:57, 1 November 2018 (UTC)

Cervical cancer is a major concern because of its high mortality rates. In 2015, 90% of cervical cancer deaths were women living in low to middle income countries. Women in these countries couldn’t access screening due to its high cost.

Cervical cancer can be prevented by regular screening and the HPV (human Papillomavirus) vaccine. There are several types of HPV. HPV 16 and 18 result in around 70 % of cancer cases.

In the Republic of Korea and with the help of the WHO, preventing cervical cancer has been achieved through childhood vaccination and early detection. In 1999, the country launched a screening process for cervical cancer targeting low-income households. In 2016, women from the ages of 20 and above had access to free pap smears. As a result of these measures, there has been a 4 % yearly decrease in cervical cancer cases from 1993 to 2014. With the increase in the number of women having access to primary screening, there has also been a 6 % rise in the early recognition of precancerous lesions leading to early treatment.

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Many thanks for contributing Bedrossian
Hi Bedrossian, thanks so much for contributing to the article on Cervical cancer. I see that you have added approximately 188 words in the lead section of the article. Be aware that any biomedical statements on Wikipedia have a stricter referencing policy than other statements made on Wikipedia because it is so very important to get good quality health information out there. For this reason, WikiProject Medicine editors reviewed your edits to check through the text you drafted and its placement within the article. The formatting of the text was absolutely fine (the only issue being placing this information in the lead section when this was already quite developed). The only other issue for future reference was the sources used. Be aware more recent sources from the last 5-8 years are favoured over older sources and review articles are deemed much better sources than journal articles looking at one study only (the idea being not to make global generalisations based on one small scale study) so do, for future reference to keep yourself right, cite review articles when backing up biomedical-related statements. For further information on WikiProject Medicine's guidance to referencing there is a short paragraph on page three of this guide to editing articles about medicine OR you can click through this easy-to-follow mini tutorial to editing medical topics on Wikipedia. The edits you made have been summarised and added to the Epidemiology section of the article so many thanks so much and happy editing! Best wishes, Stinglehammer (talk) 00:41, 12 November 2018 (UTC)