User talk:BeeCaroline2019/Onapsis

I would need help writing the content of this article from an NPOV and experienced Wikipedian perspective. It is a cybersecurity organization with reliable third party sources to be published. Thanks!


 * I suggest you review WP:CORPDEPTH. I don't have access to the Gartner source (and I expect acquiring that access would set me back more than US$1000?), but all others provide only trivial coverage, with some of them not independent either. Fixing that will require rewriting basically the entire draft. The use of "™" in an encyclopedia article (excepting articles such as "trademark") is inappropriate. The wording at times includes PR buzzwords. For example: "The Onapsis cybersecurity solutions delivers vulnerability assessment [...]" - I don't think you can explain how a solution can deliver something, can you? (Also, the grammar in that quote is garbled, but that's irrelevant since the draft needs to be rewritten top-to-bottom anyway.) Huon (talk) 00:01, 13 November 2019 (UTC)