User talk:Beechnj/sandbox

In the first addition I wouldn't say "about two and a half months", I would say "two and a half months" because your information needs to be facts. However, the summary was very good overall. I think overall you did a very good job and made a minimal amount of mistakes. Good job. Dlit19 (talk) 20:19, 24 October 2019 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Dlit19 (talk • contribs) 20:18, 24 October 2019 (UTC)

I would add more information on the section where you discuss her being a historian and if she had any major impacts in that regard. The lead section is very informative but I would try to cut it down a big and only include strong main points sense you go into further detail later in the article you don't need to in the lead. The information you added about her mother was very relevant and informative. good job! --Shaynacodd (talk) 03:42, 25 October 2019 (UTC)Shayna Codd