User talk:Beekeepergabi/Galapagos penguin/AMousou Peer Review

Peer Review_Extra Credit (Bonus)
Good Evening,

I hope all is well; I have read the article that you are all planning on editing and it is very interesting. I see that you all have not begun your edits in your sandbox so I decided to peer review the original article. I was able to provide certain ideas for possible edits. You are all going to do great contributing to this article and I can't wait to see your edits from your presentations.

Best Regards,

(AMousou (talk) 23:46, 18 October 2023 (UTC)

Thank you for your time on reviewing my article. I will take into consideration the comment you made on changing the tone of the article to sound more informative. In addition, I'm aware of the importance of visuals, therefore I plan on adding more visual pictures to the Wikipedia in the future. Thank you again for your critiques, they were very helpful. Best, Nancy D. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Glitter25 (talk • contribs) 17:52, 24 October 2023 (UTC)