User talk:Beekeepergabi/Galapagos penguin/Ayahbear127 Peer Review

Peer Review Response
Thank you for your peer review! I definitely agree that the article could use some fixing and adding of citations. Also, I agree that we should mention the impact of urbanization in our article's lead section, as we will try to add a whole urbanization section in our article (good idea or bad idea?). To clarify, our group considers tourism to be a part of urbanization, or at least an impact of it. There's not much urbanization, if any, going on in the Galapagos, besides that (to my knowledge) so we will just be trying to focus on that as well as the pollution that urbanization brings. Your feedback is much appreciated and gave me a lot of ideas. Thank you!

Beekeepergabi (talk) 00:50, 25 October 2023 (UTC)