User talk:Beekeepergabi/Galapagos penguin/Vanessabear Peer Review

Peer Review Response
Thank you for your peer review! I definitely agree that the lead section could use some work, unfortunately we haven't done that yet. I think it'll be best to fix up that lead section once we have added content officially and therefore will be more precise when doing the lead. I agree with the map image, I think by adding a pin point map showing the areas where the penguins are located is a good addition to the article. The article could use some tuning, especially with the citations. Your peer review is much appreciated!

Beekeepergabi (talk) 00:44, 25 October 2023 (UTC)