User talk:Bekah01

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Welcome to Wikipedia, Bekah01! Thank you for your contributions. I am Oshwah and I have been editing Wikipedia for some time, so if you have any questions, feel free to leave me a message on my talk page. You can also check out Questions or type at the bottom of this page. Here are some pages that you might find helpful: Also, when you post on talk pages you should sign your name using four tildes ( ~ ); that will automatically produce your username and the date. I hope you enjoy editing here and being a Wikipedian!  ~Oshwah~  (talk) (contribs)   22:40, 21 August 2020 (UTC)
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Hello, Bekah01, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Peer Review
Hi Bekah, I think your article so far is very good. I believe you have covered the five elements that make a Wikipedia article good, as you have a clear beginning section, everything is organized well, and neutral sources. You added a lot of information to the article, and definitely gave a more detailed account of his life. If anything, I would say perhaps some more information in the Auschwitz section? Other than that, I would say it looks organized, informative, and neutral. In terms of sources, I think everything looks good, except I feel like I remember one of the modules saying to stay away from sources like "The New York Times." I could be totally wrong, and please ignore this comment if I am. Thank you for sharing your work! Rpowers2 (talk) 14:42, 28 September 2020 (UTC)

WCI peer review
Hi Bekah, I think the organization of your article is very good. You started off with a clear and strong introduction. The way you organized the article by titling the different secionts by the different names of the concentration camps was very clear and easy to understand. I Think you could add a little more information about Alfred Kantor's life before being sent to concentration camps. That section of the article was very short and could definitely include more details. I think including information about his life before the camps would semphisize how much his life changed when he was sent to concentration camps. I thought you covered thre five elements of a good Wikipedia page well. You seemed to have reliable sources. I think you could also include more information about the different concentration camps. The article just seemed a little short for me. Overall the article was very organized, informative and neutral. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Giannapicariello (talk • contribs) 17:25, 1 October 2020 (UTC)