User talk:Bellaruby12/Environmental issues in New York City/Cynthia1u2 Peer Review

Peer review
Thank you for peer reviewing our article. We are going to add more information to show the connection between the air pollution and how it affects different age groups within new York. Also some of the sources that we spoke about are added into the actual article page and not the sandbox page but we will be added source to both the article and sandbox page from now on. We are planning to add images to our article with content that we are talking about. As we continue to add more sources and add more the the subjects we are going to show a main point within the article and on how air pollution affects new York's aggression. In addition how environmental issues affect new York's overall health. Again thank you for peer reviewing our rough draft for the article. Bellaruby12 (talk) 16:29, 1 November 2022 (UTC)


 * Thank you for your review and suggestions for our article. we have drafted some ideas during this week and we are adding them soon as possible. Anaeradze (talk) 18:56, 1 November 2022 (UTC)