User talk:Bellaruby12/Environmental issues in New York City/Jeanius1 Peer Review

Peer Review
Thank you for your peer review on my group's article. We will be adding pictures/images later on through the rough draft. I agree when talking about homeless and garbage that we need to rewrite it in a neutral way to not try and persuade the read. I do agree that we need to find articles showing crime rate increasing with air pollution and how rats impact new Yorkers life within a neutral setting. we are grateful you taking your time are reviewing our article. Thank you again. Bellaruby12 (talk) 16:22, 1 November 2022 (UTC)


 * thank you so much for your review. Our group got together to discuss the review you provided and we want to thank you for your feed back, our article needs improvement and we will implement some of your suggestions Anaeradze (talk) 18:53, 1 November 2022 (UTC)