User talk:Belle2018/sandbox

Honestly, I think this is a very good start to the article. I believe you do a good job of staying unbiased in the way your phrase your sentences. I think at this point, like you noted you just have to find more sources to add more information. Keep up the good work!!--Rose gold12 (talk) 23:54, 9 February 2018 (UTC)

I think you have a great start! Your lead section seems to be well developed, but could use a few minor changes in sentence structuring to make it flow a little better. I like how you structured your article. -- Belles14104 (talk)