User talk:Belleevans/Mary E. Peabody/Cassierodrique Peer Review

Peer Review: I really enjoyed your wiki page on Mary Peabody! I thought it was super detailed and flowed very nicely. The organization was really well structured. You also wrote in a very neutral tone which is great. I appreciated how you started out with her personal life and ended with her legacy. I would suggest considering another word other than "News" perhaps for the one section, since that that word is rather broad. There were also a few typos I noticed, but only a couple - otherwise it looked great! The "Advocacy" section is your strongest in my opinion. You did a great job of going into detail about Peabody's advocacy work. I think you all did an amazing job with this project and I learned a lot about Mary Peabody! -Cassie Rodrique