User talk:BellotaUK

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Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (April 23)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by KylieTastic was:

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KylieTastic (talk) 08:37, 23 April 2024 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Canal Boat Diaries (April 23)
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microbiology Marcus [petri dish·growths] 12:43, 23 April 2024 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Canal Boat Diaries (April 23)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by MicrobiologyMarcus were:

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microbiology Marcus [petri dish·growths] 14:39, 23 April 2024 (UTC)

Draft:Canal Boat Diaries
Hi BellotaUK, I have correct the links and references you have presently in the draft article and formatted them properly. To do this yourself, you can follow the instructions at Help:Referencing for beginners. The references you presently have are interviews and therefore not WP:Independent. Further, you've used sources such as The Mirror which are not great at establishing WP:Notability, see WP:DAILYMIRROR. For specific guidance on what generally demonstrates notability of television series, see WP:NTV.

In addition, some of the prose and writing on the article is not description or neutral in its point of view. You might consider the advice at Help:Your first article. I would suggest reading other articles about TV series to see what kind of language is used on the project for similar articles.

If you have any further questions, feel free to ask me here, making sure to start your reply with  so that I will be notified of your response. Cheers, microbiology Marcus [petri dish·growths] 14:49, 23 April 2024 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Canal Boat Diaries (April 23)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by S0091 was:

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S0091 (talk) 17:12, 23 April 2024 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Canal Boat Diaries (April 25)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by ToadetteEdit was:

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Toadette Edit! 15:14, 25 April 2024 (UTC)


 * Hi what more do I need to get CANAL BOAT DIARIES onto Wikipedia? Are local newspaper reviews/reports about the series acceptable? Thanks BellotaUK (talk) 15:27, 25 April 2024 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Canal Boat Diaries (July 7)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SafariScribe was:

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Safari Scribe Edits! Talk! 15:42, 7 July 2024 (UTC)