User talk:Bellsryre/Buryats

Try to reference the sentence that would come before it on the regular page. Also, consider changing the last sentence to "because cows are important to their culture, milk is considered sacred." This will help clear up any confusion for the reader. Overall, I like the added information, and it expands and clarifies what the wiki page is trying to communicate.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Bellsryre/Buryats/Klhart3_Peer_Review?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_peer_review Klhart3 (talk) 13:38, 16 October 2019 (UTC)