User talk:Benc1021/sandbox

Empress's peer review
I believe your article is off to a great start. I would add the names of Ortega's bodyguards if you can find that information because that would be a great fact to contribute. Also, add a comma after "In November of 1990,". I would add information about what the Sandinista political faction was. Overall I would additionally, make sure your grammar is in the right tense and your sentence fluency is accurate. Once you do this, your article should flow better and make it easier to read. Good luck!

MaKinlee's Peer Review
I think your article is starting off good! There are a few things I would fix though. For example, I would add some footnotes to the information you have stated in the article to provide readers with the source that you have received the information from. This would also make your article more valid. Additionally, I noticed a few grammar errors in the article, so I would just review the article and proofread it to catch some of these mistakes. Overall, I think your article is full of great information to add to the article! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mchampaign (talk • contribs) 15:30, 22 October 2018 (UTC)

Lexi's Peer Review
Your additions to this article are great so far. I would add the names of the body guards, as well as link some of the names of places, people, or institutions to their wikipedia pages if they exist. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Arperk8974 (talk • contribs) 15:35, 22 October 2018 (UTC)