User talk:Benfuda/sandbox

Peer Review (Samantha Soracco)
Be careful when you mention "financial burden" and "increasing difficulty" as it may come off as coming from a non-neutral point of view. Maybe instead of stating the affects of tuition using words, it would be better to use numbers to represent this burden on students. What you have is really good but maybe think about adding a chart or something that represents those numbers.Samanthasoracco (talk) 14:17, 23 October 2018 (UTC)

Peer review from Neal
Sources are well incorporated with article, first source is about the student loans. Second is with the trend of higher education, then third is about the population and incomes.

the author is working on the loans in United States. Points out why the loans are rising. The question he asked is a supplement for the original article, and the sources are interacting with other subtitles under United States.

Overall comment: the sources are well incorporated, and the question that why debt is rising in United States is supplement for the original article. To reach the requirement of this assignment, need more sources.