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hey bee] frioutgiofifu9f [[User:Benitakeziaho|Benitakeziaho (talk) 15:34, 26 January 2016 (UTC)

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Organization: The Slut shaming paragraph is chronologically for the most part. With the examples below I think you could expand more and get into more detail.

•	“It is an insult to woman when they are being disclosed as anything overly sexual, with the exception of being married, where being sexual is accepted. Some examples which may cause one to be slut-shamed will include: dressing, having casual coitus, rape (which ties in with victim blaming).” •	I don’t think there is any unnecessary or off topic stuff however you could expand more on multiple topics. •	When getting into the Victim Blaming paragraph you could give the perspective of the man being accused of rape, after touching on the women who are “asking for it” with particular clothing. I’m sure men are accused by how they look or dress as well. •	Opinion: The belief in a victim taking partial blame in the crime due to their lack of conservative traits. •	The article does give the great insight and feed back however I need more explanations.

MorganBethClay (talk) 14:53, 17 March 2016 (UTC)