User talk:Benitocpf

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Olivia's Peer Review
Heading: I think the heading is strong, I would just change this part "presides over the 13th trecena of the sacred 260-day calendar," to make it more clear-- not really sure what it means to preside over a section of the calander. You could also maybe mention the festival here in the header.

Sources: you may want to add more to the citation than just the last name and page. Also, instead of citing it over and over again, theres a feauture where you can reference them all to one citation.

But overall, looks great! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Oliviathomas66 (talk • contribs) 02:18, 8 October 2018 (UTC)