User talk:BenjaminHayes

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Lauren Francesca
Thanks for your efforts to improve this article, unfortunately you are running into a few problem. Firstly, every statement in a biography of a living person needs a reliable source. The article is almost wholly sourced by links to youtube and the subject's biography which do not cut it. Also, you are adding information to the lead that is not reliably sourced anywhere in the article. Some links that might help you are WP:RS, WP:42 and WP:POV. I'm happy to help you if you're not sure. Flat Out (talk) 03:18, 4 September 2015 (UTC)