User talk:Benjamin Barry/sandbox

Peer review: I think your article looks very well put together. I like that you extended the intro section to her page. Some phrases, however, are a little biased/unfactual, such as "could be one of the most valuable contributions to early history of photography" in the last paragraph of the intro. Additionally, I'm not sure what you mean by labeling one of the sections as "Assessment." It might be better rephrased as "Style." Jjames29 (talk) 19:39, 1 April 2018 (UTC)Jonah James