User talk:Benjamin Charles Baird

Welcome!
Hello, Benjamin Charles Baird, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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COM 482 Intro
Hi! I'm Tiana and I'm in COM 482 with you. I think I did this right maybe!(COM 482 1 (talk) 01:24, 9 October 2020 (UTC))

COM 482 Introduction
Hi! My name is Allie. I'm one of your classmates in COM 482. Have a great day! Allie partridge (talk) 23:24, 9 October 2020 (UTC)

Welcome!
Welcome to the class and to Wikipedia Ben! I think that working on Off-speed pitch like a great article. Lots to improve and, obviously, seems very connected to your other interests and your gig in the St. Louis Cardinals organization! — m a k o ๛  18:08, 12 October 2020 (UTC)

Feedback on your draft
Greetings ! I've gone over User:Benjamin Charles Baird/Off-speed pitch and I think it looks great! I love that you took photos. That's so great. My only real suggestions are about organization. My suggestion is to (a) turn the types of pitches into a subsections and (b) use the template or something similar to link to the subsections. Let me know if you need help or direction with that. If you think it's helpful, you can consider uploading or linking your images from the other articles about the pitches. I think that would be useful and helpful!

That said, this all really looks pretty good. Once you've done a final pass to clean up some of this stuff, please go ahead and move your changes over into the live version. I think with another pass, you'll be in really great shape! — m a k o ๛  19:20, 4 November 2020 (UTC)