User talk:Benjamink23/sandbox

Hi Benjamin, if your title is taken from the exhibit at the Contemporary Jewish Museum, then I'm wondering how you will clearly cite the title. Perhaps change the title and then create a section called "Black Sabbath: The Secret Musical History of Black-Jewish Relations" to talk about the exhibit in particular? Also, I wonder if you could limit your article or task to a specific time period, event, or person. Great job finding the Karp piece in JSTOR. --Hishaikh (talk) 17:25, 6 November 2018 (UTC)Hina

Hi, I changed the article to make it clear that it is about "Black performance of Jewish Music," with only a potential section on the "Black Sabbath" I would like to do a less broad time period, it would probably encompass the 20th century as there aren't too many academic sources that would allow me to a more specific topic. Would it be good to focus on 1-3 black artists and their performance of Jewish music? All from the 20th century. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Benjamink23 (talk • contribs) 20:33, 6 November 2018 (UTC)

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Hi again, I understand. Yes! That's a great idea to focus on 1-3 black artists in particular even if they're all from the 20th century. This would give you a chance to provide more in-depth, specific information instead of perhaps broad overviews.

Hishaikh (talk) 20:32, 15 November 2018 (UTC)Hina