User talk:Benjifisher

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I just finished rewriting Barbara Milberg. I explained on the talk page for that article why I think this is not a COI. What should I do about the two comments at the top of the article? Both of these were added to the previous version: one says that the article "is written like a résumé" (links to Conflict of interest) and the other says "This article has an unclear citation style". Benjifisher (talk) 01:38, 17 February 2014 (UTC)
 * I had a quick read through the article and it still has issues about NPOV and reading like a resume. The wording is very personal and "emotional". The article contains several complimentary words that are not supported by their sources and are clearly introduced by someone who personally knows the subject. Mkdw talk 07:20, 17 February 2014 (UTC)