User talk:Benni Berlin

Your submission at AfC Douglas Lee (September 23)
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Looking at your AFC draft, you need to read the guidance on reliable sources. For example, wikis are not reliable, though you may well be able to use whichever reliable sources were used in the Wikipedia article which you are trying to use as a reference. You had also formatted some of the references wrongly, as you can see from how they are being displayed. - David Biddulph (talk) 13:46, 18 November 2013 (UTC)

Douglas Lee (choreographer)
Hi Benni Berlin, I moved your draft into article space at Douglas Lee (choreographer). I added a couple more references from newspapers and removed the references to Wikipedia articles—Wikipedia can't reference itself. You can create your next article directly in article space without going through Articles for Creation. Just make sure that you have at least three good independent references to support the notability of the subject. Best wishes and I hope you continue to contribute to Wikipedia. Voceditenore (talk) 15:55, 18 November 2013 (UTC)