User talk:Bennie&thejets/A’s LGBTQ+ Communication and: Marriage, Dating, and Social Media

Peer Review
Hello A! The text that is provided is focused on the subject of dating for LGBTQ+ people and the importance of interpersonal connection in this society. It covers important issues including personal struggles, the value of encouraging social networks, and the impact of pressures like stigma and prejudice in society. Additionally, the text presents the dynamics and difficulties of LGBTQ+ relationships without strongly endorsing any one viewpoint. It might, however, address possible biases present in some sources or viewpoints, especially in relation to how dating applications like Grindr are represented.

Overall, this is a great start because it provides insightful information on LGBTQ+ communication and is a worthy starting point for additional conversations on LGBTQ+ relationships and experiences. Caelguez (talk) 02:51, 16 April 2024 (UTC)


 * Thank you all for your feedback on the draft, I appreciate the insight you provided. In response to the feedback, I plan to address the points raised by ensuring I provide more representation of LGBTQ+ dating experiences, particularly in relation to the portrayal of dating apps like Grindr. I aim to highlight the complexities and different perspectives within the LGBTQ+ community regarding these platforms, acknowledging both their utility and the potential issues they may present. I will enhance the discussion on interpersonal connections, social networks, and the impact of societal pressures on LGBTQ+ dating experiences. I will also include more range of viewpoints and addressing possible biases in sources. Thank you again for your input, and I look forward to incorporating these improvements into my assignment. Bennie&#38;thejets (talk) 17:57, 16 April 2024 (UTC)

Dr. E Review
A, please see my feedback in Canvas. Great start here. I asked you to update some clarifying questions on the research and Wiki words to watch. You may also need to update some sources for the next draft given the source comments on the bibliography. (OsaRosa (talk) 05:04, 16 April 2024 (UTC))


 * Hi Dr. E Thank you for your feedback on the paragraph regarding interpersonal communication within LGBTQ+ communities. I appreciate your suggestions for clarification and refinement. I will address these points by defining interpersonal communication within LGBTQ+ communities more explicitly, emphasizing the diversity of these communities by using the plural form, and adding LGBTQ+ to the first line for inclusivity. Regarding the mention of Grindr, I will revise the sentence to clarify whether individuals seek help or use it primarily for dating. To adhere to Wikipedia's guidelines, I will rephrase the section mentioning homophobia to ensure it is neutral and without using potentially contentious language. Additionally, I will adjust the focus from "many" to provide more specificity or context as needed. Thank you again for your constructive feedback, and I will make the adjustments mentioned. Bennie&#38;thejets (talk) 18:02, 16 April 2024 (UTC)