User talk:Bennie&thejets/A’s LGBTQ+ Communication and: Marriage, Dating, and Social Media/Bibliography

E's Peer Review Sample for Class
'''A: This is just a sample for the class: Please ignore. :)'''

S, I really appreciated your start on this bibliography, and Source A looks like a great fit for your section because…. I noticed you have two journals for B and C sources that are not Communication journals, so those may need to be replaced to fit the requirement… (OsaRosa (talk) 05:25, 11 April 2024 (UTC))


 * Sample of a reply. (OsaRosa (talk) 05:29, 11 April 2024 (UTC))
 * Thanks, E, for this feedback....(OsaRosa (talk) 18:27, 11 April 2024 (UTC))

Peer Review
These articles offer a thorough summary of a number of topics related to marriage, dating, LGBTQ+ relationships, and media portrayal. With its many viewpoints on the difficulties and dynamics encountered by LGBTQ+ people and communities, each piece adds insightful analysis to the part to which it belongs. Your Bibliography is laid out with so much detail, explaining how and why these articles are relevant to LGBTQ+ Marriage, Dating and Social Media. Overall, your bibliography looks amazing and will definitely help me to modify and improve my final draft of this project so that I can be more descriptive in my work and have clear Caelguez (talk) 03:21, 16 April 2024 (UTC)


 * Thank you for your feedback on my bibliography. I'm glad to hear that you found it thorough and insightful. I appreciate the acknowledgement of the detail provided in explaining the relevance of each article to the topics of LGBTQ+ marriage, dating, and social media portrayal. To address the feedback provided, I plan to further elaborate on the specific insights and viewpoints offered by each article within the body of my project. This will involve expanding on the analysis provided in the bibliography to offer a more comprehensive understanding of the complexities and dynamics surrounding LGBTQ+ relationships and their portrayal in media. Thank you for your feedback! Bennie&#38;thejets (talk) 18:05, 16 April 2024 (UTC)

Dr. E Review
A, I really enjoyed reading your newest sketch plan for your bibliography. Please see my feedback in Canvas for you on this draft. The biggest area to work on here is needing more Communication sources and replacing out ones not from our field. They are good sources (just not for this Communication Studies page). Please see Canvas and respond to this feedback on Wiki during our workshop time. (OsaRosa (talk) 05:04, 16 April 2024 (UTC))


 * Thank you for providing feedback on my assignment. I appreciate your insights and suggestions for improvement. I will address the concerns raised by replacing non-COMM sources with articles from journals that focus on communication studies. I'll ensure that the chosen articles not only mention communication but also have authors who are recognized as communication scholars. I will replace Source 8 with a more COMM-specific journal article to strengthen the coherence of my sources. Regarding the small updates, I'll correct the usage of "transgendered" to "transgender" in Article 2's title and adjust the DOIs to only include the year in the reference list. I will also consider updating Article 5 to a more communication-specific focus. Thank you for pointing out these areas for improvement, and correct your suggestion for my final assignment. Bennie&#38;thejets (talk) 18:08, 16 April 2024 (UTC)